Oil Painting Revisited

I am an associate member of the Arizona Artists Guild. To become a juried member, you have to be accepted into 3 of their juried art exhibitions. An associates only juried show is coming up, so to prepare for it, last Monday I attended a session that discussed artwork presentation and included a critique of artwork. I had brought along 2 oil paintings; “Monument Valley” and “Map Reading Gone Wrong”. To make a long story short, in the critique many problems were identified in both paintings along with suggestion for improvement. It was also stated that without making the improvements, the artwork should not even be entered. That left me in a quandary as the artwork was due today and that gave me only 4 days to make corrections on an oil painting, and the paint would need some drying time. I decided to rework “Map Reading Gone Wrong” and just not enter “Monument Valley”. My first step was to tone down the violet shadows with warm tones. I pretty much eliminated the violet hues throughout the painting. Next, I needed to dull the two figures in the painting to make it look more as if they were standing in the shadows of the hillside. The final adjustment was to bring some detail into the foliage that was close to the viewer. I finished these changes over the span of 2 evenings. Next, I bought a frame and today I framed the painting and delivered it to AAG. It felt like a whirlwind this past week! I also matted and framed a pastel drawing from one of my life drawing sessions to enter into the show. Below are images of the before and after “Map Reading Gone Wrong”. What do you think?

3-15-12, “Map Reading Gone Wrong” (original), 24″ x 30″, oil on canvas


9-29-12, “Map Reading Gone Wrong” (revised), 24″ x 30″, oil on canvas

Monument Valley – In Progress

Monument ValleyThis past March, over Spring Break, Mike and I took our travel trailer on its maiden voyage to Monument Valley where we spent a few days touring around the beautiful countryside. Of course we took a lot of photographs. I had hoped to do some watercolor painting while we there, but we never spent enough daylight hours in one location for an extended painting experience. Because of that, I am now working on a 24″ x 36″ oil painting based on this photograph that I took while we were touring in the valley.
In-Progress #1At this point I have been working on the painting for a couple of weeks. I am working from the background forward and just finished the section beneath the sheer cliffs on the right side of the painting. I am not a realist….I definitely work in a more painterly style, it is what I like to do the most. I like the play of bolder and brighter colors sitting side by side each other. Tomorrow is Mother’s Day. Mike and I are getting together with my sisters for breakfast. Afterwards, I know I need to do some more studying for my assessment center test because I have to take the test next Saturday. Hopefully, I will have some time in the afternoon to work on the painting as I would like to complete the hillside that is behind the man on the horse. I will have to wait and see.